When I first came I couldn't write an essay without errors. I feel better now, and more confident about my writing. This class was really helpful in every thing I did through the semester. In other classes I had to do writing, and I took some of the things I learned here, and apply it to those classes. My reading, writing, and pronunciation had improve a great deal since I came. I constantly talked in class and that helped my pronunciation. I also expand my Vocabulary a 15% more than the first day.
I also did a Power Point that I think is the best of every thing I've ever done. I spend a lot of time looking for the pictures to match the information. When I was done, I presented it to the class, and I felt great because i knew my material was good. My class really liked it and I felt I made another accomplishment.
Now people had told me that my English has improve a lot and my writing is beautiful.
I feel I need more because I want to get to the point that everything I write is perfect. Not just perfect in what I say but in how I wrote it. The first semester is the hardest of all but I learned more in 5 months than what I did in a whole year of high school. I feel like I accomplished this and I want to do even more now that I got the tools.
I also did a Power Point that I think is the best of every thing I've ever done. I spend a lot of time looking for the pictures to match the information. When I was done, I presented it to the class, and I felt great because i knew my material was good. My class really liked it and I felt I made another accomplishment.
Now people had told me that my English has improve a lot and my writing is beautiful.
I feel I need more because I want to get to the point that everything I write is perfect. Not just perfect in what I say but in how I wrote it. The first semester is the hardest of all but I learned more in 5 months than what I did in a whole year of high school. I feel like I accomplished this and I want to do even more now that I got the tools.
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I agree, you are doing so well, Eli. Keep on going. You have all the qualities you need to succeed. You have a keen mind, and the ability to take everything you learn and apply it to other classes which is wonderful! I wish you all the luck in your future classes and in whatever you do in life!
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